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This was my first mock up of my home page. After receiving feedback i realised i needed to re think my idea as this work looked like a students work and i wanted to take it from student to professional.

Before i finished my second mock up i wanted to get feedback. The feedback i got was that i needed to improve on the live folder section as it makes it look unprofessional , someone suggested that i show the lives to improve it. Another improvement i was given was to make sure all the lines were the same size.

Here i have improved on the live folder and made sure all the lines are the same size. I have also finished off all the writing , i got feed back that i need to have a bit of breathing space as their is a lot on one page.

Here i have freed some space at the bottom , i have made sure both the profile pictures are inline and the username are in line. I have also ensured that the text is inline.
Here i thought i had finally got my final idea but then i realised the picture was blurry so had to change that in order to get it perfect.
Final idea

This was my first mock up of my home page. After receiving feedback i realised i needed to re think my idea as this work looked like a students work and i wanted to take it from student to professional.

Before i finished my second mock up i wanted to get feedback. The feedback i got was that i needed to improve on the live folder section as it makes it look unprofessional , someone suggested that i show the lives to improve it. Another improvement i was given was to make sure all the lines were the same size.

Here i have improved on the live folder and made sure all the lines are the same size. I have also finished off all the writing , i got feed back that i need to have a bit of breathing space as their is a lot on one page.

Here i have freed some space at the bottom , i have made sure both the profile pictures are inline and the username are in line. I have also ensured that the text is inline.
Final idea


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